assignment re-do
Jesse, Chris and Sam,
I understand that you first made the video with the impression that it had to be one single story. I will give you my comments regardless of that, for the purpose of this exercise. I see that you have put extra effort into editing a 2nd video and will take that into consideration.
-Your first shot works.
-As mentioned in class your 2nd shot is too wide to be a medium shot and I would rather you chose colors that are saturated in your subject instead of just increasing the saturation in the camera or in post.
-Same thing for your 3rd shot, it starts by being a Full shot or Wide shot and then transitions into a Medium shot at best but it’s nowhere near a Medium Close Up
-your 4th shot is good as well, but why not cut before the camera gets all shaky?
-5th shot is good, but again, you should have cut before the camera starts to move.
-6th shot works very well.
-7th shot works.
Overall good job.
Total: 85+ 3 pts for creating the 2nd video = 88/100
